The graph below gives information about how much people in the United States and the United Kingdom spend on petrol. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line chart illustrates the percentage of spending on petrol among different
income
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groups in the U.S. and
U.K.
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the U.K.
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, spending decreased with higher
income
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in the U.S.,
whereas
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,
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spending increased with lower
income
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in the U.K. Looking at the
the
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U.S. data in detail, it can be seen that the percentage for the lowest
income
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group
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stood at 4% at the
begining
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beginning
, before reaching a peak at around 5.5%. When it comes to
middle-
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the middle-income
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income
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group
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, it declined slightly to 4%. Notably, the figure
droped
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dropped
rapidly to 2% in the highest
income
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group
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. It can
also
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be observed from the U.K data that the lowest
group
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started at 0.5%, which was the lowest figure among all groups. After
that
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the figure rose significantly to 3%
and
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it was six times higher than the lowest
income
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group
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.
In addition
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, it
further
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increased to a peak at 4% in the middle-
income
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, and
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group, and
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then
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declined a little to 3% in the highest
income
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group
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words income, group with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • expenditures
  • disparities
  • evolved
  • fluctuations
  • stabilization
  • significant gap
  • trends
  • economic conditions
  • vehicular technology
  • public transportation
  • summarise
  • comparison
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