The maps show changes in a city in 1950 and now.

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The given layout provides information on changes that have taken place in a
city
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between 1950 and the present day.
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, the
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has undergone substantial development, with significant expansion of residential areas, the construction of new infrastructure, and the transformation of natural features. The population has
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increased considerably, reaching 200000. In 1950, the
city
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was a small, residential area located to the north of the river and a business district situated to the south. A government building and bridge are positioned near the river. The transport system was limited, there were only a few major roads , and the airport was located on south-east site of the
city
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. Population was amounted to 20000. At present, the residential area covers a much larger portion of the
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, extending both north and south. The business district has
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enlarged and occupies a central position. It is visible that
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the river has been modified, with 2 lakes appearing and a dam has been constructed to the east.
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, the road system has been considerably developed, with more major roads connecting different parts of the
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,
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the airport remains in the same location, it has been enlarged. There were 2 bridges, one of them added to the east,
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the second one’s location has been modified.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words city with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "considerably" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • city
  • map
  • 1950
  • now
  • old
  • new
  • house
  • houses
  • road
  • roads
  • street
  • streets
  • lane
  • block
  • blocks
  • park
  • parks
  • garden
  • gardens
  • shop
  • shops
  • market
  • markets
  • school
  • hospital
  • church
  • center
  • center
  • train
  • bus
  • rail
  • bridge
  • river
  • water
  • edge
  • centre
  • grow
  • growth
  • change
  • changed
  • expand
  • build
  • built
  • replace
  • replaced
  • there
  • there is
  • there are
  • now there are
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