The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table
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information about
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forested land
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hectares around the world, between 1990
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2005.
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, it can be seen that
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Europe
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the highest numbers compared to
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the lowest. In detail, Africa between 1990
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2005 slightly decreased.
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, Asia in 1990 began with 576, ten years later declined,
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again. Europe from 1990 to 2005
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. North America started with 708
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after that
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2000 and 2005 remain unchanged.
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Oceania in 1990 began with 199, there are graduall declined until
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197 in 2005. South America in 1990 was 946, ten years after was 904
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suddenly dropped to 882 in 2005,
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the most below over happend worldwide. The second
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Oceania and South America
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Africa
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with decreased rates, but Europe and Asia
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in impact
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Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
Basic structure: Change the sixth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the sixth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Hectares
  • Forested land
  • Regions
  • Distribution
  • Trends
  • Historical data
  • Deforestation
  • Urbanization
  • Outliers
  • Proportionately
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