An overseas friend wants to visit your country on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Recommend the best time of year to visit and why Describe the types of accommodation your friend could choose

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Dear Karen, I hope

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letter finds you well. I am writing

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to give you some advice about my country for visiting in holidays. I am from India, and I am suggesting you

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visit in Mid-September. At that time, most of the tourist attractions are open, and they welcome tourists

whole-heartedly

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wholeheartedly

. You can visit Goa for adventure activities, and Punjab to see historical places and local attractions. For accommodation, I recommend you

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book a hotel in advance, because hotels are almost

book

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season. Hotels are good for better views

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and provide comfort and convenience to the visitors.

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, if you want to enjoy natural places like

parks

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parks,

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then

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I would suggest

home-stay

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a home-stay

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with a family. I would be happy to help you with anything,

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plan

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your trip and making bookings for you. I am really excited to spend quality time with you. I am looking forward to seeing you soon! Warm wishes, Sam

kaurjagdeep2097

Apr 20, 2026

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Add one more clear reason why this time is best.

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Say more about places to stay, like price or place.

coherence and cohesion

Use linking words like also, so, and however.

coherence and cohesion

Keep each paragraph on one main point only.

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You answer all parts of the task.

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The tone is friendly and warm.

coherence and cohesion

The letter has a clear start and end.

coherence and cohesion

Ideas are easy to follow most of the time.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

160 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

mild weather
clear sky
crowded
peak season
low season
guesthouse
hostel
homestay
holiday apartment
city center
public transport
book in advance
local food
comfortable
affordable

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