The maps below show an industrial area in town of norbition, and planned future development of the site

The

map

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illustrate Key information about the transformation of norbiton industrial

area

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that will be

devolopment

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developed

.

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overall

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, it is

clean

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clear

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from the graph that the

area

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underwent a

siginficant

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significant

development, with some tourist

facility

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facilities

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added,

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some exiting feauture were removed or replaced.

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according

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to what is shown before the

chanages

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changes

, the

area

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mainly consisted

by

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of

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a factory located in the

southren weast

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southern west

of the

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,

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in addition

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, there is a river in the north of the

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, and

and

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apply

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a farmland

neat to

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near

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it

,besid

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that, there is a town located in the

weastren

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western

side of the

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. Following the transportation, the

area

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saw a construction of school located in the east of the

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,

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, there will be a playground cross of the river, and shops in the middle, and it will be a medical centre beyond the shop, the factory replaced by a housing, and the farmland shrinking, a new bridge will be built above the river, and there is a largely unchange in the town