The maps below show an industrial area in town of norbition, and planned future development of the site

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The
map
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illustrate Key information about the transformation of norbiton industrial
area
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that will be
devolopment
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developed
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overall
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, it is
clean
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clear
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from the graph that the
area
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underwent a
siginficant
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significant
development, with some tourist
facility
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facilities
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added,
while
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some exiting feauture were removed or replaced.
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according
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to what is shown before the
chanages
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changes
, the
area
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mainly consisted
by
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a factory located in the
southren weast
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southern west
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,
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. In
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in addition
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, there is a river in the north of the
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, and
and
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a farmland
neat to
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near
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it
,besid
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that, there is a town located in the
weastren
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western
side of the
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. Following the transportation, the
area
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saw a construction of school located in the east of the
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,
furthermore
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, there will be a playground cross of the river, and shops in the middle, and it will be a medical centre beyond the shop, the factory replaced by a housing, and the farmland shrinking, a new bridge will be built above the river, and there is a largely unchange in the town

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Vocabulary: Replace the words map, area with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 5 times.
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