The graph below shows the number of students from the US, the UK and Australia who studied in universities in other countries from 2002 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line graph illustrates the data on how many people from three English-speaking countries studied abroad, from 2002 to 2007.
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, the number of American students who enrolled in international study programs has consistently exceeded those from the UK and Australia throughout the period. Meanwhile, there was a gradual decline in the number of British scholars overseas after the first two years, whilst
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Australia has recorded the same count of students every year. At the beginning of the era, there were slightly under 50,000 Americans who studied in other countries, and
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decreased to its lowest point in 2004 at approximately 46,000 individuals that year. Afterwards, the share has accumulated before it peaked at more or less than 50,000 outbound learners in the
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two years.
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, in 2002 and 2003, 30,000 British people pursued education internationally, but
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rate subsided over time until it stood at marginally above 20,000 individuals in 2007.
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, there were exactly 10,000 Australians who undertook studies abroad each year from 2002 to 2007.

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