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The diagrams give information about changes in a student accomodation. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The map compare layout of
student
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accomodation
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accommodation
 in 2010 with its current view.
Overall
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, after reconstruction communal area has
added
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been added
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and
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, and
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 half of
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student
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the student
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 bedroom has removed.
in
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In
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 2010, the accomodation had consisted of four
student
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bedroom
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bedrooms
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 and the corridor divided them
to
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into
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 two
side
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sides
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. on the right-handside kitchen and lounge located.
and
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And
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 now the structure has been changed. The number of rooms has halved, and their name rewritten to
student
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 bedroom A and B
and
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, and
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this
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 room has
wider
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a wider
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 space with
equipments
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equipment
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. The corridor has
replaced
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been replaced
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 by a largely communal area which now serves
to
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apply
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the students as a social place
of
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in
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 the
buildiing
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building
.
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, a new study and laundry room
has
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have been
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 added
instead
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 of two former bedrooms at the lower point of the building.
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 bathroom facilities remain available, the
overalldesign
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overall design
 now prioritises shared living, studying, and convenience over the previous bedroom-focused layout

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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words student with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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