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The table shows the results of a survey of first-year students in three courses: Economics, Law, and Commerce, focusing on the percentage of students who rated different aspects of their course as “very good”.

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The table shows the results of a survey of first-year
students
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 in three courses: Economics, Law, and Commerce, focusing on the percentage of
students
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 who rated different aspects of their course as “very good”.
Overall
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, Commerce
students
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 were the most satisfied in almost all categories,
while
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 Law
students
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 gave the lowest
ratings
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, especially for teaching
quality
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. Economics
students
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 had mixed views, with very high satisfaction in teaching but weaker results in other areas. In detail, Commerce
students
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 reported the highest levels of satisfaction. 95% were happy with both pre-course information and teaching
quality
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,
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 tutor support was
also
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 high at 93%.
Ratings
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 for resources were slightly lower, at 81% for printed materials and 86% for other materials. Economics
students
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also
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 gave strong
ratings
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 for teaching
quality
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at
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 95% and 92% were satisfied with tutor support.
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, only 55% were happy with pre-course information, and resource
ratings
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 were lower at 59% and 62%. Law
students
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 showed more moderate results
overall
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, with 72% satisfied with pre-course information and 79% with tutor support.
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, only 67% rated teaching
quality
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 as very good, which was the lowest among the three courses.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, however, overall, while".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, ratings, quality with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "gave" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 3 times.
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