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The diagram illustrates the process of cycling plastic bottles.

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Overall
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, there are nine processes from used
plastic
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bottles
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 to the new
plastic
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 products
which
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, which
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includes
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include
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 the two main processes
that
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of
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 cycling and
manufacture
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manufacturing
. First of all,
plastic
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bottles
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 were put into the recyclable garbage can.
Then
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 they were collected
buy
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by
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 the truck and were transported to
recycling
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the recycling
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 centre and put
them
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apply
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on
a
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apply
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conveyor belts to
classify
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be classified
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. After sorting, the suitable
bottles
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 were compressed into
block
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a block
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 and
was
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were
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 crushed with
mill
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a mill
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 into
fragment
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fragments
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. At the same
time
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time,
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 they were washed. In the next stage, these
fragment
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fragments
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 were
to
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apply
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collected and put into a machine to produce
plastic
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 pellets
which
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, which
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 were
heats
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heated
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 to form
raw
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the raw
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 material of
plastic
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.
Next,
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the raw material was stocked in the shape of rectangular.
Finally
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, the raw material of
plastic
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 would
produced
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be produced
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to some
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into
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plastic
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 containers like
plastic
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bottles
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of the
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for
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 daily life goods
and
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, and
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 if there were used, these
plastic
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product
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products
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 would be put into the recyclable garbage can and be
recycling
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recycled
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic, bottles with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 0 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the first paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycling
  • mitigate
  • environmental impact
  • landfills
  • conservation
  • sorted
  • residual waste
  • adhesives
  • shredded
  • pellets
  • manufacturing
  • ecological
  • economical
  • sustainable
  • automation
  • raw material
  • life cycle
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