The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000. ▪️Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph illustrates the number of three types of fast food
were
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eaten by Australian adolescents during the
last
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25 years of
20th
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the 20th
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century.
Overall
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, it is shown that
hamburger
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the hamburger
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became the most popular among Australian teenagers, showing a rapid increase over the period.
Conversely
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, the consumption of fish and chips declined significantly throughout the timeframe. Focusing on pizza and hamburgers, it stood
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at
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5 and 10
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per year in 1975. By 1980, both increased until 1995,
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it is rise gradually
for pizza
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and
sharply
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hamburgers rose sharply
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for hamburgers. The number of
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pizza was eaten
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remain
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stable at 85 for the
last
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5 years of the century.
In contrast
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, hamburgers stood at 100
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per year. As for fish and chips, the figure
begin
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began
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at 100
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before dipping to 85 in 1980,
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rising to 95 over the next five years. It
then
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fell dramatically to 35 by the end of the century

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Vocabulary: Replace the words times with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • rise
  • increase
  • grow
  • go up
  • upward
  • fall
  • decrease
  • drop
  • dip
  • steady
  • stable
  • sharp
  • gradual
  • total
  • amount
  • year
  • period
  • types
  • burgers
  • pizza
  • fried chicken
  • chips
  • snack
  • share
  • part
  • portion
  • most
  • least
  • dominant
  • ask
  • trend
  • paraphrase words: graph shows
  • in general
  • compared with
  • during
  • throughout
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