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The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie charts illustrate the proportions of hazardous
waste
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 disposal
methods
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 employed in the United Kingdom,
Sweden
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, and the
Republic
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 of
Korea
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.
Overall
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,
landfill
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 overwhelmingly dominates
waste
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 management practices in both the UK and
Sweden
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,
whereas
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 the
Republic
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 of
Korea
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 relies primarily on recycling. It is
also
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 evident that the UK
utilizes
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 a more diverse range of disposal
methods
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 compared to the other two countries. In the United Kingdom,
landfill
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 accounts for a substantial majority at 82%, far exceeding all other
methods
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. Chemical treatment and the dumping of
waste
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 at sea each represent 8%,
while
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 other
methods
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 are negligible.
By comparison
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,
Sweden
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 distributes its
waste
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 disposal more evenly, with
landfill
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 constituting 55%. Incineration plays a significant role at 20%,
while
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 recycling and chemical treatment make up 25% and a minor proportion, respectively.
In contrast
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, the
Republic
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 of
Korea
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 demonstrates a markedly different pattern, with recycling representing the largest share at 69%.
Landfill
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 accounts for a considerably smaller proportion at 22%, and incineration comprises the remaining 9%. In conclusion,
while
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landfill
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 remains the predominant method in the UK and
Sweden
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, the
Republic
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 of
Korea
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 stands out for its heavy reliance on recycling, highlighting a clear divergence in
waste
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 management strategies.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, methods, sweden, republic, korea, landfill with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • deal with waste
  • dangerous waste products
  • pie chart
  • percentage
  • proportion
  • the largest share
  • the smallest share
  • a similar figure
  • in contrast
  • while
  • compared with
  • account for
  • make up
  • be used for
  • landfill
  • chemical treatment
  • deep underground
  • incineration
  • recycling
  • major method
  • minor method
  • balanced system
  • depend on
  • dispose of waste
  • a high proportion
  • a low proportion
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