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The table shows information about metro systems in six different cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph
describe
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describes
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 information about metro status in
new york
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New York
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,
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london
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London
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, tokyo,
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paris
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Mexico
, mexico and beijing and how it works.
Overall
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, it
clear
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is clear
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 from the table
,
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that
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 New
york
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York
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 has the most
lines
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 of the underground system.
whereas
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,
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London
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the London
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 metro
cost
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costs
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 the higher singel ticket
beween
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among
 all of the cities.
Paris
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 as small place wich affect the length to be
shortest
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the shortest
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 of all time.
Acooriding
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According
 to what
shown
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is shown
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, the number of
lines
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range
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ranges
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 between 24
to
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, to
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 11 where New york is 24
line
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lines
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 across the city of total length
656
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of 656
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 miles.
meanwhile
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Meanwhile
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,
London
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 has 249 miles in
less
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fewer
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lines
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which
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, which
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 is 11, but the value is higher than any place to
mak profite
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make a profit
 from it. Tokyo, Mexico and
Paris
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has
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have
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lines
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 13,12 and 16,respectively.
In addition
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, Beijing people are using the metro more than 3.6 billion time in a year. On
other
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the other
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 hand, Mexico and
London
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shows
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show
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 the lowest
using
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usage
 by far
1.6
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, 1.6
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 and 1.2, respectively. There are variations in the price of tickts but the
avarege
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average
 number
gose
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goes
 to
Paris
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 and Tokyo with
price
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a price
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 tag
as 2.30$
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of $2.30
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 and 1.64$, respectively.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words london, paris, lines with synonyms.
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