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Band 4

neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat . Explain the reason for the noise . Apologies . Describe what action you will take

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Dears neighbors, I am writing to
apologize about
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apologise for
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 what happened
in
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at
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 my house
last
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 week. As you know, I had some repairs and
renovation
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renovations
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last
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 time. My house is very old and has some issues in it
and
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, and
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 it has took long time to fix it. I really
apologize about
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 that
I
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. I
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am sorry for
your
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the
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 annoyance. In the future, if I have some repairs and
decorations
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decorations,
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 I will notify you before we start. Thank you for your time. I look forward to
response
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a response
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. Best Regards. Saud Althunayyan

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task response
Say all 3 parts more fully: why the noise happened, say sorry clearly, and say what you will do next time.
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Add one or two clear details about the repair work, like what room or what kind of work made the noise.
coherence and cohesion
Use a clearer order: reason first, then apology, then future action.
coherence and cohesion
Link ideas with easy words like and, because, so, and next time.
coherence and cohesion
Add a better end, for example asking for understanding or saying you hope there will be no more noise.
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You clearly say sorry to your neighbors.
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You give a real reason for the noise: repairs and renovation.
coherence and cohesion
Your letter has a simple beginning and ending.
coherence and cohesion
The main ideas are easy to follow.
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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