The table and graph below give information about internet searches inthe US between 2004 and 2010.

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table and line graph illustrate the total number of internet

searches

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in the US and the market share of different

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engines from 2004 to 2010

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, the total number of

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increased dramatically over the period,

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Google experienced a significant rise in popularity and became the dominant

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engine.

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, most other

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engines either declined or lost market share. In term of -In terms of total

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, the figure rose sharply from 4.5 billion in 2004 to 16 billion in 2010, indicating a strong growth in internet usage in general. Regarding individual

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engines, Google’s share increased steadily throughout the period, rising from around one third in 2004 to approximately

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by 2010.

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, Yahoo showed a gradual downward trend, falling from about 30% to around 20%. Microsoft remained relatively stable with a slight increase, staying in the mid-teens. Meanwhile, AOL and Ask

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both experienced continuous declines, eventually accounting for only a very small proportion of

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by 2010.

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May 5, 2026

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The table and graph below give information about internet searches inthe US between 2004 and 2010.

some feel that governments should prioritize healthcare instead of other important areas. to what extend do you agree or disagree?

Many people believe that watching a live performance is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.