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Band 2

Many people think that education in university should be free for all students, no matter what their financial background is. Do you agree or disagree?

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Education in university should be free for all students regardless of their financial background is a controversial statement that needs to be
unraveled
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. Some argue that being educated gives people the capacity to overcome any trials in their
lives
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while
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others
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 are still speculative and think that anyone can
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. Education is a privilege that should be taken seriously and accessed by those who have the capacity to take on the responsibility of pursuing something. There are
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 those who state that making it known that education is free for all is a good way to entice everyone to join

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State your main view in the first part. Say clearly if you agree or disagree.
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Finish the essay with a clear ending. Your essay stops too early now.
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Add one or two clear main ideas and explain each one more.
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Use examples to support your ideas. Real and simple examples can help.
coherence cohesion
Group ideas into full paragraphs. Each paragraph should have one main point.
coherence cohesion
Use linking words like first, also, however, and in conclusion.
coherence cohesion
Make sure each sentence connects well to the next one.
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You introduce the topic in a clear way.
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Your writing shows some ideas about both sides.
coherence cohesion
There is a basic flow from one sentence to the next.
Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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