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The table shows percentage of students giving good ratings for different aspects of a university in China in 2000, 2005, 2010.

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The table illustrates that the
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 about
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 diverse branches of university in
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China
 in three years 2000,2005 and 2010
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 experienced were inceriase, except for
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 of modules offered,
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building
/teaching facilities. In
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 there was
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 part of studensts elect for Print resources,with 87% in
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 with 63% voting for Technical Quality and 45% for Electronic Resource. Over the next ten years, the number of students who voted for Technical Quality remained
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 after 5 years, before rising slightly to 69% in 2010. The result
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 Electronic Resources rose by
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 as much as the end of 2010,
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standing
 at 88%. In
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ultimate
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 it had
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 result
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 Print resources.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • student satisfaction
  • university experience
  • surveys
  • facilities
  • policies
  • cultural factors
  • economic factors
  • expectations
  • perceptions
  • reputation
  • improvement
  • significant increase/decrease
  • influenced
  • aspects
  • ratings
  • trends
  • comparison
  • speculation
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