Government plans to construct an airport in your locality. Write a letter to the authority. -Explain where you came to know about the news. -Describe the negative effects of airport construction -Ask to consider alternate site for airport construction No less than 150 words

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Dear Sir, I hope
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finds you in good health. I am writing to express my concern regarding the construction of
airport
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an airport
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in our
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. I am Sam, living in
rural
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a rural
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area
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of North York. Yesterday, I was reading
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the
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newspaper
of
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"The Global
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" which mentioned that the government is planning to build a new airport in that
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.
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the idea
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is
great,
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the selection of rural
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area
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for that work is highly disappointing. If the airport is constructed here,
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nobody will like to live there. It not only makes the place
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but
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create
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problems
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as pollution, heavy traffic as well. I want appreciate it if
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you could
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kindly reconsider
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idea.
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We
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would be grateful if you select
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another place which will be far away from residential areas
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and schools. Your support in
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matter would be a great deal to me. I look forward to your prompt response. Yours faithfully, Sam

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Answer all parts more fully. Say more about why the airport will be bad for people in the area.
coherence and cohesion
Use clear linking words like also, because, and so to join ideas.
coherence and cohesion
Keep one main idea in each paragraph and add one or two clear details.
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Use a formal tone all through the letter. Avoid words that sound too personal.
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You answered all three bullet points.
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The letter has a clear opening and ending.
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Your main opinion is easy to understand.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • locality
  • environmental degradation
  • wildlife disturbance
  • noise pollution
  • traffic congestion
  • displacement
  • economic concerns
  • small businesses
  • alternate location
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