In the modern world, people no longer need to use food or products from animals, such as medicine and clothing. Do you agree or disagree with that statement?

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statement. Yes, humans may not need clothing from

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anymore, but they still hunt

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to the edge of extinction for their fur, teeth, claws or tails just to wear them as accessories. Human kind has brought thousands of different animal species to extinction , so

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isn't just about humans "needing" the

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its about our greed. We will keep using the

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even if we are capable of creating artificial meat, medicine or food, because

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society will always have the greed that brought thousands of species to annihilation. Tasmanian Tigers, Caspian tigers, dodos, passenger pigeons, American crocodiles.

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american crocodiles were hunted for their valuable skins used to make shoes, belts, bags and more. From the 1950s to the late 1960s, excessive hunting rendered the American crocodile endangered , bringing them near destruction for petty, simple things like accessories.

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, my favourite animal passenger pigeons; The Passenger Pigeon’s story is a grim one. It was one of the most abundant birds in the world - but by the early 20th century, their species had been hunted to

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(they would migrate in flocks of billions through the sky!) , their meat was used to feed slaves and the poor , and they were slaughtered, quite barbarically on a prodigious scale.

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, humanity will always need

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, whether for their clothing, medicine, food , or so many more selfish and grim reasons.