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The first table below shows changes in the total population of New York City from 1800 to 2000. The second and third tables show changes in the population of the five districts of the city (Manhattan, Brooklyn, Bronx, Queens, Staten Island) over the same period.

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The tables illustrate the
population
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 in New
York
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 City from 1800 to 2000, and with five sub districts, how the
population
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 percentages are distributed in these cities
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Manhattan
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, Brooklyn, Bronx, Queens and Staten Island.
Overall
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, the
population
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 of New
York
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city
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City
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 increased significantly from 1800 to 2000;
in addition
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, the largest
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 growth
occured
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occurred
 between 1900 and 2000. There was a rapid fall in the
Manhattan
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population
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 and the
percentage
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 of Manhanttan
population
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 in 2000. In 1900, other districts increased their populations than
Manhattan
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,
while
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 there was a rapid increase in
population
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percentage
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 from 1900 to 2000. The highest
population
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 was 8,009,185 in 2000 in New
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,
although
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 the
percentage
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 of
Manhattan
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 recorded the least contribution.
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, there was a higher
percentage
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 in the
Manhattan
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population
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 in 1800. The
percentage
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 of the
Manhattan
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population
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 gradually decreased over the period. In 2000, the
population
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 of Brooklyn, Bronx, Queens, and Staten Island contributed to the New
York
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population
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, which was recorded as 6,471,089 and 81%

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, york, manhattan, percentage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rapid" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • city
  • people
  • rise
  • grow
  • increase
  • fall
  • decrease
  • overall
  • pattern
  • trend
  • period
  • early
  • late
  • year
  • district
  • Manhattan
  • Brooklyn
  • Bronx
  • Queens
  • Staten Island
  • move
  • move to
  • housing
  • jobs
  • transport
  • subway
  • home
  • area
  • change
  • more
  • less
  • two
  • three
  • now
  • then
  • different
  • similar
  • note
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