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The diagram below shows how plastic bottles are recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The given diagram illustrates a ten-stage process by which
plastic
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bottles
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 are recycled and transformed into new
products
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.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 the recycling of
plastic
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bottles
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 is a cyclical process that consists of use, collection, transportation, sorting, compressing, crushing, washing and cleaning, transformation, making new
products
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 and reuse.
First,
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plastic
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bottles
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 are collected from recycling bins by the public.
Then
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, they are picked up by large trucks and transported to a recycling centre. After that, the
bottles
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 are sorted by workers into different groups.
Following
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this
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, they are compressed into large blocks. In the next stage, the blocks are crushed into small pieces and washed very carefully in liquid.
Then
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, small
plastic
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 pellets are made by a machine. After that, these pellets are transformed into raw material through heating. The raw material is used to produce new
products
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,
such
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 as
bottles
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, clothes, pencils and bags.
Finally
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, the
products
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 are sold in the market to customers, and the whole cycle starts again.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic, bottles, products with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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