Consumption of Spreads The graph below shows the consumption of 3 spreads from 1981 to 2007.

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The line graph illustrates the
consumption
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of three types of spreads—butter, margarine, and low-fat spreads—from 1981 to 2007. The units are measured in
grams
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.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the
consumption
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of butter and margarine decreased sharply over the
period
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.
In contrast
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, the
consumption
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of low-fat spreads increased rapidly over the next 5 years from 1996 to 2001. In the first half of the
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, butter
consumption
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rose slightly between 1981 and 1986. After that, the amount of butter peaked at 160
grams
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1986.
However
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, there was a sharp drop of around 50
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by the end of the
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Similarly
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, the figure for margarine decreased slowly between 1981 and 1986. It increased steadily to 100
grams
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and remained stable from 1991 to 1996. In the
last
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half of the
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, it fell dramatically to 60
grams
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by the end of the
period
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. Meanwhile, the
consumption
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of low-fat spreads started in 1996. There was a rapid growth over the next 5 years throughout the
period
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.
Then
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, it declined slightly to 70
grams
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in 2007.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, grams, period with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rapidly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • spreads
  • increased
  • decreased
  • stable
  • significantly
  • approximately
  • per capita
  • remarkable
  • peaked
  • experienced
  • started
  • remained
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