The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (20 mins.)

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The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (20 mins.)
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (20 mins.)
The graph illustrates the different
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of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005, on
three-year
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basis.
Overall
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, the percentage of Total air pollutants, Industry, and Households decreased,
while
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the percentage of Transport slightly increased between 1990 and 2005. The ratio of Total air pollution declined significantly from 7
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tonnes
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in 1990 to
approxiamtely
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approximately
3.5
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tonnes
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in 2005, which has decreased to one-half in 2005 compared to 1990. The highest
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pollutant was Industry throughout 25 years, which was about 5.5
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tonnes
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in 1990 and 2
million
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tonnes
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in 2005. The ratio of Industry declined considerably between 1990 and 2005.
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, the percentage of Households slightly reduced from 1
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tonnes
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in 1990 to 0.2
million
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tonnes
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in 2005, which declined
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0.8
million
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tonnes
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.
Meawhile
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Meanwhile
, the rate of Transport slightly declined from 1990 to 2005. It was about 1
million
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tonnes
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in 1990 and 2005.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words million, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Emissions
  • Air quality
  • Pollutants
  • Contributing factors
  • Industrial processes
  • Transport sector
  • Household energy
  • Agricultural activities
  • Percentage change
  • Decade
  • Reduction
  • Increase
  • Significantly
  • Fluctuations
  • Trends
  • Sustainable practices
  • Environmental policy
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