The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. (Line graph)

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The line graph illustrates the number of requests received by the Tourist Information Office in an unspecified city during six months in 2011.
Overall
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, even though enquiring in person was the lowest figure among all categories, it peaked until the end of the given period,
while
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sending requests by letter or email did not experience growth over time. Turning to the details, requesting in person started with 400 in January before doubling steadily in March. After that,
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, it rose sharply to 1200, 1600 and
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closed
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2000 in June. 800 belonged to sending by letter or email in January, which remained unchanged until March, before going down to 600 in April and 400 in May. It maintained the same number in June. Telephoning,
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, started with 900 and had a small amount of decline and went up steadily to 100 until April and peaked at 1600 in the
last
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month.

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