The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010

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The bar chart illustrates the
comparing
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comparison of
expenditures of the United Kingdom and
France
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on five
differences of
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different
consumer products throughout the year 2010. Measured in pounds sterling.
Overall
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, the UK spent more money on all five consumer goods than
France
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in 2010, with cars being the most expensive item for both countries.
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While perfume
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was the least popular purchase in
France
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. The most significant difference in expenditure between the two countries
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camera
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cameras
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. Turning to the three highest-spending categories, cars were the most expensive consumer good for both nations. The UK spent £450,000 on cars, which was £50,000 more than
France
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’s expenditure of £400,000. For computers,
France
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’s spending of £380,000 was slightly higher than the UK’s £350,000. Looking at the remaining categories, perfume was the least costly item for both countries, with
France
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spending £200,000 compared to the UK’s £150,000. The most striking difference,
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, was in cameras
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the UK’s expenditure of £370,000 was more than double
France
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’s £150,000, representing the largest spending gap between the two nations across all categories.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words france with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "differences" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • expenditure
  • consumer goods
  • chart
  • countries
  • overall
  • compare
  • analyze
  • categories
  • consumer spending
  • trends
  • proportions
  • statistics
  • increase
  • decrease
  • significant
  • notable
  • remarkable
  • substantial
  • considerable
  • determine
  • conclude
  • in conclusion
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