Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter: * say where and when you are going * explain what you would like your neighbour to do * offer to do something for your neighbour in return

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Dear Mr Smith, I hope you are doing well.

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I'm

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thrilled to let you know that my vacation has been approved by the company. I will be leaving for Australia on 13th May 2026

and

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, and

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am planning to stay for 10 days over there.

However

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, there

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is a

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catch to

this

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, I need your help to take care of my beautiful home on my behalf. I have already given the keys to Mrs Smith

last

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evening.I just need help with a couple of things

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am gone.

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, please check the mailbox every alternate days as I am going to receive my work permit from the government.

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, can you please water my plants every evening if possible? As a token of love, I am planning to bring something for you from the place I am visiting.

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, I'll help you

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with

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cleaning the lawn. Thank you very much for your support and consideration. I truly appreciate having

such

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a helpful neighbour. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Best regards, Ayush Shukla

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May 23, 2026

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Task response: Say a little more about why you need the work permit, so the purpose is more clear.

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Task response: Your offer in return is good, but make it more clear and direct in one sentence.

coherence and cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: Check small grammar and word form errors, because they can make ideas less clear.

coherence and cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: Keep verb forms and capital letters correct, like 'I am thrilled' and 'I'.

task response

Task response: You answer all three parts of the task.

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Task response: The tone is warm, polite, and right for a letter to a neighbour.

coherence and cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: The letter has a clear start, middle, and end.

coherence and cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: You use easy linking words like 'Firstly' and 'Also' well.

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

174 words

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