One of your friends in a foreign country is starting an import-export business, and he has asked you to recommend a product from your country to him. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: say what product you want to recommend to him tell him where he/she can get this product explain why you want to recommend this product

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Hey James, Hope you are in radiant health. The reason I am writing to you is to recommend a product that will be beneficial for your new import export business. I'm very happy and even excited for your new business. I recieved you letter
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week,
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, I was taking time to think about the product that you can buy from
India
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to sell around the world and which in turn will
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benefit you. After looking thoroughly, I found that goat
cheese
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is something you can look forward to.
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you can buy it from many cities in
India
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, small villages in Northern
India
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are home to
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cheese
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. I want you to connect to these places directly, as they can provide you with fresh
cheese
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in bulk.
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, you can save lots of money as well, as they charge less if you buy directly from them.
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, I know there are many things in
India
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which you can't find around the globe, but Goat
cheese
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is something that has gained popularity. It is replacing other cheeses in the market.
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, buying from small villages will help their people with employment and money. I hope you liked my recommendation and will look forward to seeing you soon. Take care, Jass

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Answer all parts a bit more clearly. Say the product, place, and why in a more direct way.
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Use a more even tone. 'Radiant health' sounds a bit too formal for a friend.
coherence and cohesion
Link ideas with simple words like 'also', 'so', and 'because'. This will make the letter flow better.
coherence and cohesion
Keep one main point in each paragraph. Some lines mix many ideas together.
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You answered the main task and gave a clear product: goat cheese.
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You gave a place to get the product and a reason for this choice.
coherence and cohesion
The letter has a clear opening, body, and ending.
coherence and cohesion
Your paragraphs are easy to follow most of the time.
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