The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.

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The depicted pie charts illustrate how typical Australian citizens deploy energy in their homes, and the percentages of greenhouse gas emissions that result from that deployment.
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, families in Australia prioritise using power for heating in general and to warm water in specific,
whereas
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most of the footprint is released
due to
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water heating and other electricity appliances. Looking from a detailed perspective, an average household directs almost half of its capacity (42%) to temperature control;
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, only 15% carbon pollution is emitted from it, which surprisingly counteracts other usages that result in more emissions than their actual utilisation. Meanwhile, hydronic heating emits 32% of greenhouse gas
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it required 30% of energy in the process. Meanwhile, 7% of power is allocated towards refrigeration, 4% to lighting and just 2% to cooling;
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, these applications emanate 14%, 8% and 3%, respectively. Simultaneously, alternative appliances discharge footprints that are nearly double the energy applied in them (15%).

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Energy consumption
  • Greenhouse gas emissions
  • Sustainable practices
  • Energy efficiency
  • Renewable energy
  • Fossil fuels
  • Carbon footprint
  • Eco-friendly appliances
  • Insulation
  • Solar panels
  • Recycling
  • Climate change
  • Kilowatt-hour (kWh)
  • Emissions-intensive
  • Energy audit
  • Smart meters
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