The charts below show the number of tourists to Australia from three countries in 1995 and 2005, and the types of travels between 1995 and 2005.

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The charts provide information about how many tourists from different parts of the world ,
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as the UK, the US, and Japan, visited Australia in the two years 1995 and 2005, and the variety of reasons for their travel from 1995 to 2005.
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, trippers from Japan represented a huge proportion of visitors in both years,
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in the UK and the US traveling to Australia was not very popular in the initial year. Backpacking dominated in all periods despite a rapid decrease in the
last
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year. In 1995, the huge figure of visitors was from Japan, it comprise 1450000 tourists,
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this
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number decreased by 400000 in 2005. The UK and the US constituted the different levels of visitors in the initial year, 800000 and 45000 , respectively,
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it considerably increased to the same number of excursionists (1450000). Of the two types of travelling, travelling for backpacking was popular during those years. In 1995, it was a little more than 150000 , and sharply increased to around 2500000. After reaching the peak, the figure dramatically decreased to 1000000
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of the period. As for staying at the resort , the beginning point was 500000 , and it twice increased to 1000000 without decreasing for the rest of the period.

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