33.The chart below shows the number of international applicants from four countries that a Europena university had from 2004 and 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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This
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chart shows the
number
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of international
applicants
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applying for a European university throughout the years. It is clear from the chart that the
numbers
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are largely dominated by
students
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from two countries
According to
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what is shown, America and China have the biggest share in terms of the
number
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of
applicants
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compared to Japan and Russia, possibly
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their high population density
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, making
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them the only two
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nations
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with more than 10,000
applicants
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. In 2004,2005, and 2007
chinese
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students
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had the highest
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.
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While in
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2006, it was roughly the same
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of American and
Chinese
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applicants
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. And in 2008, for the first time, Americans surpassed the
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of
Chinese
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.
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, we notice that the
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numbers
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number
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of
the
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Japanese are consistently increasing, the
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numbers
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number
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of
russians
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Russian
students
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was consistently increasing but declined
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2008.
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, American and
Chinese
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students
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make up the overwhelming majority compared to any other nationality.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, applicants, numbers, students, chinese with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • trend
  • comparison
  • applicant numbers
  • peak years
  • growth
  • decline
  • pattern
  • influence
  • factors
  • diplomatic relationships
  • economic conditions
  • demand
  • convergence
  • divergence
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