The line graph below shows the average high and low temperatures in Glasgow, Scotland, over the course of a year, while the table provides information on the average monthly rainfall and sunshine hours.

The graph illustrates both the minimum and maximum temperatures that occurred in the city of Glasgow over a twelve-month period,

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the table depicts the duration of sunshine and mean rainfall.

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, temperature of the Glasgow warmed up in summer, especially in the middle of the July.

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, in December, the average centimetres of rain peaked significantly, and hours of daylight were relatively higher in June.

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with, in January, the weather was extremely cold, standing at 1 °C

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the warmest temperature was 5 °C. Over time, the trends gradually increased, and in July, the coolest

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was 10 °C, whilst the hottest was 18 °C.

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, the temperature dropped significantly to 9 °C, and the average low

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was 4 °C by the end of November. The winter season features the coldest climate conditions. In January, the trend drops to an annual low of 1

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, and the highest is 8

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, the volume of rainfall reached 11 cm in January. After a few months, it stood at

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6 cm. Ultimately, in December, the average volume of rainfall reached 12.5, which is the highest among other months. On the one hand, daylight duration in winter was the shortest, depicting only 1 hour. It gradually escalated to 6 hours and dropped to 1 hour again in December