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Many students are studying abroad as part of their degree programs. What are the advantages and disadvantages.

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Namhurs students are studying in
othre contry
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other countries
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abroad
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foreign
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that
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aspect
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. In my
oppinion
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opinion
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study
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 abroad as part of your program has many advantages
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learn
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 about more
cultter
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cultures
, additional take
deffrint experinse
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different experiences
 and develop your
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career
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on
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 the one
hand
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 studying
out
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 your city has
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 disadvantages .
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 as most of
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the nation
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 who are studying abroad com whithout them family ,
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 that
make
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lonely
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bigging
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big city
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addition
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 meny student do not have
responsibility
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the responsibility
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 to support them self to studying or cleaning .
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on
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 the other hand , studying abroad has
meny
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many
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example
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 make new frinds frome another nations ,
in
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addition
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 develop
your self
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yourself
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take
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this
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 it will
chang
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change
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character
, you will learn new thing same how to clean the dishes very fast , or what is the most rispy for pasta . In the end abroad is not bad , it can be
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beatiful experins
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beautiful experience
 in your life , but you should learn how to be responsibility person .

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Answer both sides more fully. You write about good and bad points, but some ideas are very short.
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Add clearer main ideas in each body part. Start each part with one clear point, then explain it.
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Use more clear and real examples. Your pasta example is not very strong for this topic.
coherence and cohesion
Make your ideas link in a smoother way. Some sentences jump too fast from one idea to the next.
coherence and cohesion
Use simple linking words well, like first, also, however, as a result, and in the end.
coherence and cohesion
Check paragraph focus. The second body part has many ideas, so it feels a bit mixed.
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You answer the topic and talk about both advantages and disadvantages.
coherence and cohesion
You have an introduction, two body parts, and an ending.
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Some ideas are easy to understand, like feeling alone and learning to be responsible.
Fully explain your ideas

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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