The map below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

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The map illustrates the layout of the college sports courts in 1990 and now.
Overall
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, now, the site has more sports facilities than before. Noticeably, the tennis fields have more courts than before. Regarding
,
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the old park
is
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, it is
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ilimenated
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intended
to
replace
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be replaced
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by other sport field. But the coffeshop is stayed
same
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the same
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without any change. First of all,
by
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in
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the east, the outdoor pool is replaced by indoor ones
,
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besides
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, the cafe and reception
are remained
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remain
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unchanged. Under them,
small
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a small
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changing room and
under it
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a
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big fitness centre
are
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have been
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added
new
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in the place of the old tennis courts.
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, by the west, the new tennis is
expended
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expanded
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to four ,
instead
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of two,
this
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in
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is in
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location
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the location
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of the old car park.
By
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On
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the left,
old
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the old
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park is replaced by the new basketball court.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • layout
  • facilities
  • diversified infrastructure
  • accessibility
  • expansion
  • investment
  • indoors fitness activities
  • modern health trends
  • transformation
  • commitment
  • sportsmanship
  • competitive sports culture
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