The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line chart illustrates
number
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the number
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of tourist that have visited the overseas over three different areas in
time
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the time
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frame of 1987 and 2007. To elaborate,the three areas
shows
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show
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some similarities
of
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in the
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number of visitors during
1992
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1992,
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with around 25 thousand
visitor
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visitors
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.
Furthermore
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, the coast shows an upward trend of
number
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the number
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of vistiors in the beginning of the 90th's.
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, the mountins shows a relatively
stready
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steady
pattern over the period. Lakes vistors where the most with around 75 thousand visitors in 2000.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fluctuate
  • Significant
  • Trends
  • Comparative analysis
  • Peak
  • Trough
  • Growth
  • Decline
  • Steady
  • Surge
  • Plummet
  • Consistency
  • Highlight
  • Reinforce
  • Data representation
  • Time frame
  • Subject matter
  • Overseas visitors
  • Tourism promotion
  • Transportation
  • Accommodation facilities
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