These days, fooddays, food travels long distances before reaching consumers, and it is therefore believed that consuming locally grown food would bring about a number of economic and environmental benefits. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages ?

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today

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society, most of the

food

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that citizens eat are come far way, some commantator argue that if people can farm

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form

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their own towns, will minimize the economic drawbacks and become

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environmentally

friendly. In

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essay, the pros and cons of

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method will be discussed.

Firstly

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, farming the

food

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locally can reduce transport

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, in Hong Kong, most of the rice

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is imported

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from Thailand,

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and transport

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cost add in the selling prices. Buyer need to bear these spending an increase their financial burden. If we can

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the rice in our

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, we can save

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money.

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is the main element we should

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consider

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problem. The

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grown locally can reduce the air pollution

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from the ship and car.

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, local

farmer

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farmers

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and farmland cannot afford

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to provide the

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food

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supply in the big

city

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is

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drawback of

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method. Most of the larger

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city

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cities

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, like Singapore, they ave large population but

less farmer

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fewer farmers

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and farmland.

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they try their best to farm the

food

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in their

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city

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, not enough to feed all citizens. Under

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situation, the selling price of the

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will

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increase,

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needs cannot

afford

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be met

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. One

city

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also

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cannot

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various

different type

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types

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of

food

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. If we do not inport the

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include fruit from other places, our

food

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choose

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will become

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. It will make

a extremely destroy

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an extreme destruction

of our

economic

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economy

, most of the

worker

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workers

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who work on

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food

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the food

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supply line may

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be unemployed

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.

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, there are benefits and drawbacks if we farm the

food

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in our towns

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method

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cope

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but

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