Some people believe arts subjects such as literature and music have little importance in schools today. To what extent do you agree with this?

It is believed that arts

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as literature and music are not

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in

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today

. I partially agree with

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statement because it is

time consuming

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time-consuming

for kids and

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distracts

from

subjects

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that are more valuable for their

future

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exams and country,

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state support is

art

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subjects

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develops a well-rounded personality and creativity. To

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with, there are compelling reasons why

art

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subjects

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have little importance in

schools

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nowadays.

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, it is not time-efficient for children to spend time

for

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apply

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drawing or learning notes because they do not use

it

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them

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as often as technical

subjects

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in their

life

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lives

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.

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, focusing on STEM

subjects

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such

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as physics,math

or

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, or

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biology is a

way more better

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better way

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to shape the

future

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preferences of

major

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a major

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in university. As long as they learn, they can comprehend which career they like to

persue

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pursue

and more easier to concentrait for it, which prepare well-qualified workforce.

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that, since most of the students care about grades, the

arduability

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arduousness

of it may worsen their mental health

which

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is detrimental and lead to

lowering

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lower

self-esteem and depression.

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, there are

specialized

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art

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schools

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for kids who are likely to study.

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, it is more

germain

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to focus on

subjects

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that are related

with

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to

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science

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and put focus on

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future

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the future

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of the student

creating

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, creating

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long-term plans.

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,

art

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subjects

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are still important for students for some reasons. Drawing, singing and reading

a

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apply

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literature can be

as

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apply

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a form of healing mentally, to relieve

stucked

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stuck

emotions and

be

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serve

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as

an

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therapy. So

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can positively affect their mental health.

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,

art

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can develope personality of the student. By

brodening

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broadening

horizon, they can have more friends, have more

versitle

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versatile

conversations and

wider

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a wider

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enviroment

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environment

.

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, most of the

musians

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musicians

or writers found their passion

on

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at

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the school desk.

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, famous british signer and

song-writer

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songwriter

Adele noticed talent in school and

by

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through

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years of hard work

blowed

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up with her songs 'Hometown Glory' and '

Lovesong

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Love Song

'.

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,

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this

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these

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subjects

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may not be

crutial

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crucial

for

future

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science

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, but

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shapes not only personality, it creates the mood of millions of people, the culture and

heals

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the souls. In conclusion,

altough the

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although

humanity

need

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needs

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to

develope

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develop

and invest

to

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in

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science

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,

but

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apply

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they must not neglect that human

being

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beings

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are emotional and their mental health matter and

art

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subjects

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brings

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bring

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joy and creativity to the world.

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,

instead

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of moving from one extreme to another,

schools

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need to maintain

balance

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a balance

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between

science

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and

art

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subjects

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by leaving a choice for student to understand their wishes.