The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, A,erican, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.

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The bar chart illustrates how many
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per day that
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chinese
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,
American
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,
turkish
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and
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visitors spent doing leisure activities on holiday in Greece in August 2019.
Overall
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,
Chinese
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and
American
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tourist
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tourists
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spent the most
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reading,
while
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Turkish
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and Brazilian
tourist
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preferred spending
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at the beach. Looking first at reading,
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chinese
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tourists
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spent the most
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on
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activity, at 8
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per day.
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tourists
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ranked
second,
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with 5
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.
In contrast
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and
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Brazilian
tourists
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spent only 4hours reading, which was exactly half the
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for
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Chinese
tourists
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. Regarding
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spent at the beach,
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tourists
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recorded the highest
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at 6
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, followed by
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visitors at 5
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, Americans spent 4
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at the beach,
while
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Chinese
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tourists
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devoted the least
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to
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this
activity, at only 3
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. Negligibly, as for visiting places, the
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were generally lower across all four groups.
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American
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and
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turkish
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share the same figures, consisting of 3
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, compared with 2
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for
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Brazilians
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.
Chinese
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visitors
recored
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recorded
the lowest
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once again,
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just 1 hour per day.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, chinese, american, turkish, time, tourists, figure with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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