The graph shows average temperatures in Paris, Dubai and Sydney

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line graph illustrates the usual whether condition , specifically temperatures , in

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,

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and Sydney. The horizontal axis demonstrates calendar months ,

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the vertical axis shows the measurement of temperature in

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.

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, there are several fluctuations between March and October in all three countries.

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and

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begin with average temperatures

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gradually they climb to the top of the chart.

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, Sydney slightly drops down in the middle of the period. Throughout

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data,

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is the hottest country recorded, reaching approximately 36

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in August

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on the other hand

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, Sydney shows a slowdown in the graph and the coolest temperature is found around 13

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in July.

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gets hotter in July and August , and it remains stable in the same period at 20

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and

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end with

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same starting points , and there is no temperature increase between July and August.