The table below shows the numbers of visitors to the Ashdown museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The chart show the result of a survey asking visitors how satisfied they are with their visit during the same two periods.

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table illustrates the three main ways in which the police distribute cash,

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the pie charts indicate the

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utilisation from 2017 to 2018. There are main categories of

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income ,

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national government, local taxes,

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sources, for example , grants.

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, cash is used for salaries for employees, technology, buildings and transport services.

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, there was a marginal increased of each source of bill allocated by the police compared to higher figures in 2018, when compared to 2017. The highest

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national government, but the lowest

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was from other sources. When considering the

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expenditures, there were significant fluctuations between building and transport in the table.

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, local taxes amounted to 102.03 million pounds, which was the highest income from the national government in 2018.

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, the salaries spent marginally decreased from 75 % to 69% proportion. Notably, there

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buildings and transport , which stayed the same as 17%. Regardless, technology smoothly flowed and recoreded modest difference from 8% to 14% increased.