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The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast foos restaurants between 2003 and 2013.

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The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast foos restaurants between 2003 and 2013.
The chart compares the development of the
frequency
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 of American fast
food
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 consumption in the years 2003, 2006, and 2013.
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, the data showed a normal distribution, with most figures lying in the group of
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 eating fast
food
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 monthly or weekly.
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, from 2003 to 2013, the mean of
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 data set shifted to the right, indicating a decreasing
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 of fast
food
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 consumption. In general, the
development of
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frequency
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 of eating fast
food
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 in America fluctuated within a small range. From 2003 to 2013, the majority of Americans visited fast
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 restaurants weekly or monthly.
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 around one-third of
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 visited fast
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 shops once a
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, another one-third of
people
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 chose to buy fast
food
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 monthly. Fewer than those, the proportion of
people
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 consuming fast
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 several times a
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 or a few times a year varied between 15% and 20%. No more than 5% of
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 purchased fast
food
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 every day or never, indicating a significant
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 distribution.
Besides
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, the mean of the
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 shifted to the right over the decade, demonstrating a decrease in the
frequency
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 of buying fast
food
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. The proportion of
people
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 consuming fast
food
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 every day or never declined to a similar extent, dropping from 4% to 3% and 5% to 4%, respectively. The rate of
people
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 buying fast
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 several times a
week
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also
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 reduced, from 18% to 16%, despite an initial increase to 20% in 2006.
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, the rate of
people
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 consuming fast
food
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 once a
week
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also
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 fluctuated, dipping from 31% in 2003 to 28% in 2013.
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, in spite of the decline in the first three years, the proportion of
people
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 buying fast
food
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 monthly grew from 30% to 33%,
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 the share of
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 buying fast
food
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 yearly
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 climbed between 12% and 15%.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, besides, while".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words frequency, food, people, week with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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