The map show a change of coastal town, called Petland, from 1950 to 2007

The map illustrates the

grown

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growth

of Petland during the period from 1950 to 2007.

Overall

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, the data shows that

this

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town faced

a

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apply

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significant changes. It is

also

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noticeable

Petland

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that Petland

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had

resident

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residents

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and

naighberos

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neighbours

.

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previously

showed

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shown

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as

high

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a high

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street, it

is became

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has become

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a large place with a lot of facilities.

According to

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what is shown,

veraity

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variety

of shops, houses, and

apartment

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apartments

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were added in different places in the town.

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, a new cinema was created in a large area for it

only

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apply

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.

Finally

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,

swimming

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a swimming

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pool was built behind the yacht marina

at

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on

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the right side of the new park

added

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apply

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. Talking about the places changed, the sea became a yacht marina, and the industrial area was removed to be

car

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a car

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park

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instead

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instead,

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where

is

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it

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was in the right and at

2007

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2007,

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at the lift.

This

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increadible edited make

this

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town a suitable place for visitors from all around the world.