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The table shows information about metro systems in six different cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Metro systems information

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The table lists 6 major
city's
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cities'
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 metro characteristics
starting
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, starting
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 from the length of the journey all the way to the price of a ride. The longest out of these cities is
New
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the New
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 York City Subway
spanning
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 659 miles, which
also
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 has the most
amount of
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lines at 24,
whereas
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London
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the London
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 Tube has the
least
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fewest,
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 11 lines
but
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 is marginally more expensive than other cities at 7.30$ per ride. The costs vary heavily depending on location
with
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 Mexico City Metro and Beijing Subway being the cheapest at 0.23$ and 0.45$ for a single ticket
respectively
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. Regarding the annual journeys, Beijing is the busiest, receiving 3.6 billion people annually,
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 London has the lowest annual passengers at 1.2 billion. To
summarize
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, all of the listed cities have marginally different pricing and length of metros,
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however
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they all
take
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 huge traffic of more than 1 billion people annually.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "marginally" was used 2 times.
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