It is often said, “when in Rome, do as the Roman do”. Do you think people should adapt and accept the culture of the country they visit? Do you think it is possible to learn a culture without learning the language?

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Certain individuals believe that when temporarily residing in a nation, they need to make efforts to integrate into the culture of that country. Some
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take
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point
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, and are under the impression that they must
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themselves with that location's language in
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to learn local traditions. I think that
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should make active efforts to respect the places they visit, but only to an extent where the locals are not bothered by their presence.
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, when one is visiting a nation, they should respect the customs and the indigenous
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of that location, in
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to not
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them. In many situations, the person visiting may find themselves in awkward situations, especially if they do not adjust to the norms of wherever they are visiting, and
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annoy locals.
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, in Arabic
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it is common to let the person on your right pass through a door
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if one does
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they may bump into somebody
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causes trouble for both parties.
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awkwardness may be unintentional, not knowing commonplace Arabic manners has disgruntled both parties in
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situation.
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, for the individual
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the experience will be better if they are more
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with the traditions of the nation they are in. An excellent example of
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would be a visitor displaying knowledge about one's country, and
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the host gifting them with a treat for being so
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knowledgeable
. I have had
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an experience many times when visiting countries, since
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appreciate caring guests. When it comes to language, it is not an absolute necessity in
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to be able to connect on a cultural level with certain groups.
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it can be helpful, especially when travelling alone, guests can
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accommodate
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by simply translating. A common
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occurrence
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is seen when tourists visit the Acropolis in Athens with a tour guide, and many times they end up knowing more than even the locals do.
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,
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language is important in providing certain nuance when travelling, tourists can understand the culture of the location they are travelling to by doing more research. When I was planning to stay in Oman for a week, in
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I researched the customs of the Omani
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, common food traditions, and how to appropriately dress when visiting.
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made my trip much more fun, without having to speak any Arabic. In conclusion, I agree that tourists must comply with the common practices of the places they visit.
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, I do not deem it necessary for them to learn the local dialect
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in
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to enjoy their stay.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cultural adaptation
  • cultural assimilation
  • heritage
  • cultural exchange
  • cultural diversity
  • mutual respect
  • linguistic acquisition
  • non-verbal communication
  • social norms
  • cultural immersion
  • cross-cultural
  • cultural nuances
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