The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO₂) emissions per person in Ireland, Sweden, France, and Spain between 1970 and 2010.

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The provided line chart illustrates the average carbon dioxide (CO₂)

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per person, in metric

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, in four countries: Ireland, Sweden, France, and Spain, over a 40-year

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from 1970 to 2010.

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emissions

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in Sweden and France saw an

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decrease, Spain experienced a steady increase. Ireland's

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fluctuated, peaking in the middle of the

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. By 2010, the

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levels for all four countries had become much more similar than they were in 1970. The figure for CO2

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in Spain started at the lowest point of 4 metric

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in 1970. It

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showed a steady rise throughout the

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, reaching approximately 8 metric

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by 2010, which meant its

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doubled.

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, by 1990, Ireland's

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had risen to around 11 metric

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before dropping to 8 in 2010.

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, France at the beginning of the

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was around 9. Its figure remained stable before significantly decreasing to 6.5 by 1990. Sweden started with the highest

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at 14 metric

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in 1970,

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went down to 9 metric

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in 1990.4 After a slight decline over the next 20 years, it finished at approximately 8.5 metric

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in 2010.

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The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO₂) emissions per person in Ireland, Sweden, France, and Spain between 1970 and 2010.

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