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The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie charts depict the shares of hazardous
waste
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management
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methods
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 used in the Republic of Korea, Sweden and the United
Kingdom
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.
Overall
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, the Republic of Korea and Sweden use the same exact three
methods
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,
while
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 the United
Kingdom
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dealing
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deals
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 with
waste
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 by using four
methods
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, including two
methods
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 that other countries
doesn't
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don't
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 use.
Moreover
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, the United
Kingdom
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 is not using
recycling
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a recycling
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 approach. Sweden and the United
Kingdom
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sorely
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apply
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rely
on
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heavily on
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 undergraound method, whilst the Republic of Korea mostly depend on recycling.
Most
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The most
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 notable factor is that, despite the United
Kingdom
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 using four
methods
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 for
waste
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management
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, 82% of
waste
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management
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handled
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is handled
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 by the underground method In the United
Kingdom
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, a total of 16% of
waste
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management
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delt
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is dealt
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 with by
dumping
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the dumping
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 at sea method and chemical treatment
methods
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 in similar proportions.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, management, methods, kingdom with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • deal with waste
  • dangerous waste products
  • pie chart
  • percentage
  • proportion
  • the largest share
  • the smallest share
  • a similar figure
  • in contrast
  • while
  • compared with
  • account for
  • make up
  • be used for
  • landfill
  • chemical treatment
  • deep underground
  • incineration
  • recycling
  • major method
  • minor method
  • balanced system
  • depend on
  • dispose of waste
  • a high proportion
  • a low proportion
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