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The bar chart below show the number of hours each teacher spent teaching in different school in four country in 2001.

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The bar chart provides data about the amount of
time
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 a teacher spent in three types of
schools
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 in four countries in 2001.
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, the majority of
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 was spent on secondary
school
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,
while
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 the least
time
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 was spent on primary
school
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 in all countries. Turning to the details, in Japan, a teacher spent 600
hours
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 in primary
school
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,
while
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this
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 figure is about 650 in
Spain
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, and
this
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 figure is similar to that of lower secondary
school
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 in Japan. About 100
hours
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 more
time
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 was spent in lower secondary
schools
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 in
Spain
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. In Japan, Upper Secondary got 700
hours
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 of service from
teachers
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. On the other side,
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Spain
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 got about 900
hours
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 of service.
Spain
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 and Iceland had quite a similar trend. In upper secondary classes,
teachers
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 spent approximately 900
hours
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 in both countries. In the lower secondary classes,
teachers
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 in Iceland spent approximately 60
hours
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, and
this
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 figure is almost similar to that of primary
school
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 in the same country. Turning to the USA, it
dominated with 1200 spent hour to
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spent 1200 hours on
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 upper secondary
schools
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.
Teachers
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 spent 1000
hours
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 teaching lower secondary grades. Considering primary
schools
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, in
this
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 country , 750
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 were taught by
teachers
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words time, schools, school, hours, spain, teachers with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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