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The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbear island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Number of tourists visiting a Caribbean island (2010-2017) 4 3.5 3 Millions of visitors 2.5 2 1.5 ٥٠٠.١٠٠ 0.5 2010 2011 2012 2013 2014 2015 2016 2017 • Visitors staying on cruise ships - * - Visitors staying on island -O- Total

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The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbear island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Number of tourists visiting a Caribbean island (2010-2017) 4 3.5 3 Millions of visitors 2.5 2 1.5 ٥٠٠.١٠٠ 0.5 2010 2011 2012 2013 2014 2015 2016 2017 • Visitors staying on cruise ships - * - Visitors staying on island -O- Total
The line graph illustrates the
number
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 of visitors to a particular Caribbean
island
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 from 2010 to 2017, divided into the following categories
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 visitors staying on cruise ships, visitors staying on the
island
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 and the total
number
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 of tourists.
This
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 was recorded in millions.
Overall
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, it is apparent that all three groups experienced an upward trend,
although
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 the combined total exceeded the figures for individual categories.
To begin
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, upon inspection of the
number
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 of people who stayed on the cruise ship and those on the
island
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 individually, in 2010, fewer than half a
million
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 foreigners stayed on the cruise ship,
while
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 more than 500,000 remained on the
island
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. After surging considerably, the figure for those on ships reached 2
million
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 by 2017.
In contrast
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, the count of people who had stayed on the
island
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 rose modestly to 1.5
million
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 in 2013, but remained relatively constant in subsequent years.
This
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 group became the fewest by 2017, despite being higher than the
number
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 on the ship at the start of the period.
Furthermore
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, for the combined trend, a total of 1
million
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 tourists went to a Caribbean
Island
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 in 2010. Having seen a significant rise over the period, by 2017, the figure had peaked at 3.5
million
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 by 2017.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, island, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 3 times.
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