The maps below show the centre of a small town called islip as it is now, and plan for its development.

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map illustrates how the small

islip

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Ipslip

town is now and

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for development in future.

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, the town center now small with basic buildings

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as shops,housing and a school, the paln add to the city another parking

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housing and built new dual carriageway. The north

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, in the

islip

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Islip

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town center now had countryside

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two big shops with the main road extended to the east

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side

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and west.The planing add same changing in the north bulit new housing and a car park in the east

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add small shopping centre.

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, add bus stuation in weast

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road to

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pedestrians only, but the big shops remained in the same place

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, the south

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now had

large

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a large

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park and housing with

school

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a school

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in the southwest, these area planning to add more houses and decrease the park

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the school remained in place

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however

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, the center srounding with dual carriageway on four sides.