Write a letter to local authorities by requesting additional sports facilities for your age in your area. Mention about the current sports facilities available. What kind of additional sports facilities should be introduced? How the new sports facilities would be a help for the people in your age group.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am Sanchita Tiwari. I am currently living in The Mundi Complex

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I am writing to request

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additional sports facilities in our area. There is a small park,

public

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a public

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gym and a football field, but they are often full, and far from our homes. I would like to request

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new facilities

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as a basketball court, a swimming pool, an outdoor running track, and a fitness centre. These sports activities are popular with young people and can be used

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different seasons. These facilities would help people of any age group to stay fit and healthy,

reduces

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reduce

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stress, and

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their spare time in a good way. It would

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provide a secure place to meet friends and build healthy

relations

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. I hope you will consider the request and take

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for the welfare of

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society. Looking forward to your prompt response. Yours faithfully, Sanchita Tiwari

sanchitatiwari60

Jul 15, 2026

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task response

Task response: You answer all parts, but add a bit more about why these new places are needed in your area now.

task response

Task response: Use a more clear formal tone, for example 'I am writing to request additional sports facilities for young people in this area.'

coherence cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: Your letter is easy to follow, but you can link ideas more clearly with words like 'also', 'because', and 'therefore'.

coherence cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: Keep one main idea in each paragraph. Put current facilities in one paragraph, new facilities in one paragraph, and benefits in one paragraph.

task response

Task response: You mention the sports places that are there now and you give good ideas for new facilities.

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Task response: You explain how new facilities can help people stay fit, use free time well, and meet friends.

coherence cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: The letter has a clear opening, body, and ending.

coherence cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: Your greeting and closing are right for a formal letter.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

154 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

local authorities
sports facilities
public gym
football field
running track
swimming pool
basketball court
fitness center
young adults
age group
stay fit
reduce stress
free time
healthy habits
safe place
take action
community benefit
well-being
outdoor activity
modern equipment

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