The bar chart shows the participation of children in selected leisure activities in Australia.

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of 5 to

14-years-olds kids

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14-year-olds

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in five different leisure

activities

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in Australia.

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, the most participation of children in these

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is

Watching

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watching

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TV/videos;

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, the

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of other

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are

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is

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less than watching

tv

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TV

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/videos. In detail, the

boys

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attended more skateboarding/rollerblading, bike riding, and electronic/computer games

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than

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girls

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the girls

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.

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, the

girls

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participated more

art

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in art

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and craft than the

boys

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.

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, all of the

boys

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and

girls

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watched TV/videos. The second most participated

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are Electronic/computer games, which 80% of the

boys

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and %60 of the

girls

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attended, and Bike riding,

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where

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approximately 70% of the

boys

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and 60% of the

girls

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participated. The least

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of kids in these

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is Skateboarding/rollerblading, with %40

attendance

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of the

boys

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and 30%

attendance

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of the

girls

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.

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,

while

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one in three of the

boys

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joined Art and craft, nearly 60% of the

girls

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joined.