The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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Jul 15, 2026

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

144 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

deal with waste
dangerous waste products
pie chart
percentage
proportion
the largest share
the smallest share
a similar figure
in contrast
while
compared with
account for
make up
be used for
landfill
chemical treatment
deep underground
incineration
recycling
major method
minor method
balanced system
depend on
dispose of waste
a high proportion
a low proportion

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Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion.